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satanistjuggalette

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[B][FONT=Times][SIZE=7][COLOR=red]DEAD
Done without work of breathing.....
Done with a bright light hanging from the ceiling....
Done and without the world, and lost of all feeling....
the mad sd eill run till the killing of the morbid soul....
the mind lost, and found in a hole of the agresser.....
as the empty decayed body lies on the ground....it will rasie 2 the faces of many mortals.......... :rolleyes:

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:rolleyes: I agree.

This: :rolleyes: Sums it up.

Protocol.

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I must say I was a little disappointed, it didn't give me the chills, but I like that poem, it was good

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Well your poem was quite good to be honest though I expected more.

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The spelling distracts (or lack thereof), "motions" such as ":rolleyes:" are intended to be described or make the reader sense what was intended... type all the words out to continue the flow... let me vizualize what you want me to see... then it may be chilling...

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I liked it, but sorry, no chills.

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dude that sucked




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