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This is my feelings


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Yeah I guess I just wrote my feelings in this one...

Don't Let This End

feels like fireworks in my heart every time you say 'I love you'. I want to talk constantly to you as if i were a hummingbird going a million miles a minute. You continue to amaze me with your suttle voice as soft as a kittens purr. You make me want you. My heart is beating as fast as a speeding bullet. You are the best thing that has ever happened to me. I get butterflies just thinking about you. Your beautiful pale skin makes me want to reach out and touch your lips. Never have i felt this strong for anyone in my entire life. Felling loved is something i am not used to. You tell me that you want me. we have never met but i feel like i have known you for decades. i long to hold you close to my chest and kiss your soft everloving cheeks. my palms are sweaty and my eyes are flutterig like butterflies. i try to keep myself focused on other productive things but all that comes to mind is you. i feel like a wave crashing into the shoreline. i cnnot know how much i love you or i will only be more afraid of it. i used to back away from these emotions but now i try to find it. when i least expect a single love straight from the heart i come across you. these feelings will never go away. please dont let this end.


This is for you Amanda baby...I love you...

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hmm....interesting
somtimes you feel like a nut somtimes you dont...-STM-

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Very nice poem, It contains lots of love. I hope you remain happy and never get in contact with misery.

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Thanks...I got a lot more poetry but I really don't feel like typing it up lol

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I like the idea, it's very powerful and emotive, but this is so cliched as to be funny in how you convey your ideas. You could be trying to amuse your audience and not be serious in your thoughts.

Reconsider what you are saying and try to be original. Sometimes, less is more.

Protocol.

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Ok...Yeah...Haiku time...

Petals drift slowly
Wilting away in the breeze
Ugly black and dead


Breath on your neck soft
Taunting me with your blue eyes
Tender lips of pink


Yeah...I guess these are cliched too but umm they are mine so I loke them...Anywho...Yup...

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Does anyone even look in this here poetry section? Didnt think so...Whatever im out...

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*feelz special n stuff* Awww...Daddy i wub 'em ^_^ *curls up on his lap* Type more soon? Pwese? *bats her eyelashes at Joshie *

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*sighs* Ok kitten....I will type more of my poems up soon then I guess...Hehehe

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YAY! *giggles* =^.^=




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