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BlOoDsHeDteaRs22

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all this pain I endure from a blood covered rasor blade...

it's all because I thought you really did love me..

Body shaking, as blood profusley runs down my arm,while memories of us suimply fade

the white satin sheets we use to lay upon,now turning a slow crimpson death

clock now stricking three, I can't tell if I'm lying in a pool of tears or my own blood...

tears fall discreetly down my pale face as I gasp for just one last breathe...

Darkness...finally overcomes me as the sick sent of death fills the room.

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That's an interesting poem as well, but it'd be better if you would spell things correctly...

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william, you should post some of your poems on here... i also remember some typos in your works...

but yeah, i thought your poem was full of descriptors and made me feel as if i was "in" the poem, good job :)

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all this pain I endure from a blood covered razor blade...

it's all because I thought you really did love me..

Body shaking, as blood profusely runs down my arm, while memories of us suimply fade

the white satin sheets we use to lay upon ,now turning a slow crimson death

clock now striking three, I can't tell if I'm lying in a pool of tears or my own blood...

tears fall discreetly down my pale face as I gasp for just one last breathe...

Darkness...finally overcomes me as the sick sent of death fills the room.[/FONT][/FONT]

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all this pain I endure from a blood covered razor blade...

it's all because I thought you really did love me..

Body shaking, as blood profusely runs down my arm, while memories of us suimply fade

the white satin sheets we use to lay upon ,now turning a slow crimson death

clock now striking three, I can't tell if I'm lying in a pool of tears or my own blood...

tears fall discreetly down my pale face as I gasp for just one last breathe...

Darkness...finally overcomes me as the sick sent of death fills the room.




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