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Alone in the cold,darkness creeps in
With no hand to hold,Love fades
Amongst the rats and the beggers
The child sits lonely for days

Why is that the child must starve
And why is that she must die
Where is her mother,where is her dad
Whom should sooth and calm her cries
Lonely in the cold
Only five years old
Yet her death is nigh

What has she done to deserve this
Was she a criminal,maybe a whore
Or maybe her mother was fired
Lost her mind and died at four

Either way it gos
Everybody knows what will 'ventually happen someday
The Death will come
Theyll ride into the sun and shell find peace 'long the way

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I know it sux but im trying.

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Please reply and tell me if you like it

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I love it hun, nice av.

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The greatest risk a man can take
Not by choice but two tied by fate
Pure and complex yet simple as this
Love is the root of hate and the jealous

Murder,war,jealous,pain
The experienced know its not a game
Either perfect and pure or gloom as rain
From te moment you meet,you reoeat their name

A king can crawl on the ground
A peasant,full and pround
Never caring bout tomorrow
Only the now

The moment on the porch,the day on the beach
That first careful kiss,now never out of reach
But then it comes,the fury,tearing like a flood
Her words slowly repeating,burning red with blood

"It's over,you dont care.I still wanna be friends
I just think wed be better off if we put it to an end."
So now it all breaks,your base torn away from your feet
Insanity sinks in,your mind taken to the brink

So be careful with this feeling
It can tear you apart
The most dangerous weapon of all
Your Heart

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Murder,war,jealous,pain
The experienced know its not a game
Either perfect and pure or gloom as rain
From te moment you meet,you reoeat their name

sorry for the errors.

te=the
reoeat=repeat

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Please tell me if you like it

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War Crimes[SIZE=7][COLOR=green][FONT=Courier]

Broken is my fragile spirit
In the dark without flame
Lying down In furied defeat
Hate prevails

Alone I swim in shame
Drums beat while I enter the gallows den
Destruction lies around the way
Hollow existence inevitable

Even as the noose
Rope,and death,and blood
Is tied around my neck
To remain for my life

Alone in the dark
I sit,paralyzed by fear
No burning flames,no crystal seas
Only the lonesome bequeifed by death

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A child born by a whore
And abandoned by the guilty
No food no water
Except on the street
What is stolen or found

Frail and fragile
Easy to break
Even easier to sell
This is no child i describe
But the soul of every
Human in this hole

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My god why have you left me
Damn you and your insanity
There is no hell nor no peace
Only the lies spit out by your tyranical voice

As you sit upon your thrones
A king of nothing and a child of a lieing whore
You master the gulluble
And manipulate the wisest of our planet

Leave us be
Stop your hate and slavery
Let us destroy ourselves
For you have planted the seeds of war upon our and now
they sprout to our ultimate destruction

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I like it... but the poem could be better.... ;)
only is an opinion...
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