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evil ash thoughs and poems, prose


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evilash

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i write alot. some of the stuff i do ends up as songs for my band...some stuff i just keep to myself...others just piss me off. so i figured i share with you guys..see how you like it...

this one is called broken

"i used to think the world was strange
a big empty void spinning in space
the more i knew the less i really know
and now i find the world i knew
the crooked bent and the slanted views
the world was normal...i was the one who didn't fit..

i'm tired of living
i'm tired of lying
i'm tired of breathing
i'm tired of trying...

lord please take away my pain!!!!

i used to think it was the fault of others
surely i couldn't be the blame
i know now that i am the root of evil
i can't stand it anymore

i'm tired of living
i'm tired of lying
i'm tired of breathing
i'm tired of trying...

lord please take away my pain!!!!

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I really like it! It's hard to say what exactly I like, so I guess mainly I like the overall effect. I don't know, but you put it together well.

I'm looking forward to more. I hope you feel inspired to post more :)
faster, faster, faster you run, but no matter how fast you run, you can never leave yourself behind... but there is something worthwhile in the struggle, something that may one day redefine the self

"Man is not so much a rational being, as a rationalizing being" - Robert Heinlein

"There are three kinds of lies: lies, damned lies, and statistics" - Mark Twain

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wow...thanks quark

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well i think i just post more of my lyrics..

dying to live

if iwas to change
nothing would remain
i'm too close to the thing i was
there's too much darkness
to much pain

inside my heart is good...
but in my mind is.....

can i ever be free
what must i suffer?
why must i bleed
suffereing just to simple be

inside my heart is good..
but in my mind....

a stained soul
a fragile being my of glass
look inside to see what i hid..
there's time enough at last
i'm tired of being strong
i need my rest
oustide i'm alive
inside i'm dead

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I like the first one with the exception of the Lord take my pain away...haven't seen that happening anywhere really (just kidding). I have a song where I even have a similar phrase (Father forgive me - my hands full of blood - father forgive me - ... blablabla). Its an industrial metal song with Butthole Surfer-like vocs :).

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I like the second one is beatiful.... and the better part is :

" Outside I'm alive... Inside I'm dead "

This part is excellent for me.... but is only a opinion

YOU ( evilash ) SHOULD USE THIS PHRASE IN YOUR SIGNATURE
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