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read my poem....it's an order


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yami

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Let death lay upon and take me in its gentle arms
forever soaring in infinite nothingness
to grace upon a land where nothing is said
and nothing has been failed
but to grace upon this land is just a dream for me
too scared to become a reality
but what else to fear but fear its self?

not bad...right?

tell me what you think of it...

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Silvius

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no, not bad at all.

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Golgotha_29

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i think your a good writer. i liked what you wrote... you can post mor4e on this topic an id read if youd want.

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  • Interests:My Interests include: The Thirst, Death, Guitars.<br>(well the thirst isn't one of my interests it's something I have, Alot latley)
Not Bad! Got any more? :lol:

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yami

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haven't been feeling very death-ish lately.....

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Diseased Tongue

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Nice...could be better...but don't stop trying... ;)

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yami

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ah! how please tell me! how could it be better!




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