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Twilight's Poetry


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twilight

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One day I met you in the rain and you said to
me "come run away with me, let us go into this world hand in
hand, and please my sweet don't ever let me go".
I jumped into your arms and made you cry for love, the greatest love of all ---and all the pretty flowers were everywhere with sounds of ultra colors,
so bright i was blinded in pure exstasy...

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blackbambi

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I like the part that says "everywhere with sounds of ultra colors" i like how you put sounds, and ultra colors together. thats some goor writing

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sorry, good writing

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**applauses** Very pretty poem. I loved it. Keep up the good work!! B)

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nice poem, loved the way you wrote it

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lovely poem. i like the way it flows.

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twilight

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Deep in the night, beyond the moons
lost in a galaxy far away
he wounders for a moment how she is
if only he could touch her
so many times he has watched
always left with an agonizing heart
"once in time, lost forever
they thought they would
join together"
untill that time he haunts her dreams
never letting her forget
the one she loved
causing her mind to drown
in illusional memories
only to wake from oblivion...
"intensely the sorrow spreads
like weeping willows
for the dead"

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Strawberry420

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great poems twilight

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nice! :)

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sometimes it can be so hard to exspress yourself and wounder if one may really understand or even care to hear you, to those who do thank you...

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" i am surrounded by trash
i can no longer bare the horrid stench
of all the negativity
i feel the envy absorbing in my pores
trying to consume every
part of my being
i sense the animosity that spreads,
planting
seeds
of
disgust..."




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