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no insult taken whatsoever :D ...i'm proud to be off my rocker...if i weren't just a little more than a bit crazy i wouldn't be as noteworthy a person...

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wow your words are very beautiful..i was in your situation once..the pain is still there and always will be...the way you rhyme your words and your use of long words is great..keep writing

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no insult taken whatsoever :D ...i'm proud to be off my rocker...if i weren't just a little more than a bit crazy i wouldn't be as noteworthy a person...

Indeed!
The line between genius and insanity is very, very fine.
I am teetering myself. :)

I'm proud to be off my rocker too, damnit! :blink:

*Awaits another morbidly beautiful work of art*
Peace,
Mourning...

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life is fucked...don't know where to turn...everything i touch...seems to crumble and burn...i hate myself more...with every passing day...a dirty fucking whore...what more can i say?...scarred, beaten, deformed...my will from me was torn...bleed me like a beast...and sacrifice my blood...my pain by little will ease...until the deed is done...until my eyes turn grayish blue...until my life i give to you...my muscles stiffen...my jaw gapes...my flesh decays...but never my hate...a burning force...forever remains...to haunt you all...on this forsaken plane...if the gods...could hear me know...would they care to deign...to find out how?...they forgot us here...long ago...your screaming pleas...never shall they know...eat your pain, your lies, and lust...kill whomever and call it just...scar your co-workers, family, and friends...they'll all see sickeningly bloody ends...we're mortals, weak little animals...popped like corn on a telephone poll...electricity pulses through our minds...frying all the insects left behind...and as the still living entrails squirm through the ever deepening blood...your head falls to the floor with a satisfying meaty thud...but you're not dead you're still alive...mouth open screaming with wild eyes...no voice issues forth just gurgling ichor...as your thoughts get slower, thicker...die...die now upon the floor...die in the blood you've bled you whore...i fucking hate you all and more...your faces from your skulls i've torn...all your seeds shall know my scorn...FUCK...WHY THE FUCK IS LIFE THIS WAY?!...feeling shitty every day...sleeping just to pass the time...i'm all out of rythm and rhyme...a weaving of spider silk, hair, and skin...this ever weakening shell i'm in...eventually i'll shed these scales...blown away by winter's gales...the winter breath wash me away...when the light fails the day...when naught but raven brave the cold...with a story never told...from his eyes to mine...crying, dying...fly away on pitch black wings...never again my voice shall sing...never again my soul rejoice...never a lightly decided choice...nevermore trust shall i give...never again to love as long as i live...silent, cold, dead, old...beaten about the head and gagged...thrown inside a body bag...zipped safely away inside my polimyr tomb...zipped inside my bacterial womb...rotting mess of maggots and worms...coming to my own morbid terms...deciding my next physical incarnation...in which body to begin my incubation...they shall know me as the beast...the one who shattered the precious peace...the one who slowly consumed them all...the one who brought about their painfull fall...the one over whom they sought control...tapeworm...in your mind...tapeworm...eats your kind...tapeworm...in your guts...tapeworm it's a must...little spiders...still inside her...roll her over...they crawl all over...ramble on and on and on...ramble till my mind is gone...link it all lyrically...perhaps some depth of me you'll see...

i just wrote that...cause i needed a good vent...i'm in one hell of a horrible mood.... <_<

Edited by Enki Anunaki, 06 July 2004 - 08:09 AM.


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*Inhales...*
I asked for morbidly beautiful,`tis what I recieved...
A wonderful piece of work.
I can see that same Raven..always telling me something, and me never knowing what it is...If that makes any sense to you at all.
I can relate to that poem very well and I absolutely love the style in which you 'vent'.
I love reading your work. It reminds me of me.
Peace,
MourningAngel...

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:D


you're welcome...and thank you...

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W0w, what can i say Dustin, your poerty is filled with so much, pain, and anger, but it really gets to me, one even made my heart run cold, the otehr, rips it aprat, their really really good :) glad were freinds, well, i think we are, well i call you my friend, anyways, W0W once again, it doesnt describe it all, but its all i have to say, im quite litterally speachless :) anyways, ttyl

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thank you very much...i value the compliments i recieve from you all...as secondshifters is my soul audience......you could call us friends...i'm a freindly enough person to those i deem worther individuals...and i really dig the people here at second shifters...it's been really fucked up as of late...my mind is tweaked...i've been in a lyrrical silence for a while now...and my creativity is coming in short spurts of extremely fast rough sketches of very strange things..we shall see when the next poetry of mine makes it to the thread... <_<

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...back to the point...

my skin is tingling...my head is numb...my eyes are dry...my mind is dumb...my muscles ache...from wound upon wound...i've been awake...i wont sleep soon...there's something wrong with this reality...i can't cut myself free...i hack into my flesh...my eyes refuse to see...my impending death...self-inflicted WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

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...back to the point...

my skin is tingling...my head is numb...my eyes are dry...my mind is dumb...my muscles ache...from wound upon wound...i've been awake...i wont sleep soon...there's something wrong with this reality...i can't cut myself free...i hack into my flesh...my eyes refuse to see...my impending death...self-inflicted WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! :lol:

see....now i just thought that sucked...that's all the poetry i have to show for since i wrote the last one in here... <_<

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i don't know what the hell the double post is about on that last one...but oh well...

here goes...a piece inspired by my recent proximity to divinity via psylocybin mushrooms... :D

fungus amongus, mann... B)

dancing...
trancing...
the leaves are golden now...
falling to the ground...
a sudden smear of shapes and lines...
saphire poison infects my mind...
falling with the rain...
distortions, lack of pain...
from darkest black to sudden light...
a dreamy haze in constant flight...
the little blue devil at my side...
my only friend in which i confide...
witness the spiral first hand...
without strength or legs i stand...
conscious mind from coil is torn...
to reattach, to be reborn...
in billowing clouds of dusky blue...
i force my shape, my way through...
fighting for my existence and control...
attempt to survive in this shit filled hole...
repetitive physical action...
giving my psyche traction...
pull the wrench out from the gears...
dissuading, diffusing all fears...
the face of a child...
distorted and wild...
wear it like a mask...
decomposing past...
mana cycle ceased...
trusting in the beast...
within my body, soul, and mind...
to take the wheel a while and drive...
i'm tired of all my futile control...
thrashing, drowning in this hole...
my muse, once loyal and true...
sold out, to pay off her dues...
vivid hallucinations...
dying, complications...
an over dose...
straight to my brain...
came really close...
to death again...

down the drain...
and out of my mind...

down the drain...
and all out of time...

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well that one must've sucked...
dandy...




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i could write and write all day long...
but who would deign to sing my song?...

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ode to suicide...

euthanasia...
i fuckin hate ya...
you're still breathing my air...
so get the fuck out of here...
i still hide my feelings inside...
pry my eyes open wide...
pour the venom down my throat...
rotting bodies sink not float...

euthanasia...
a waste of flesh...

euthanasia...
seek out your death...

euthanasia...
it wont sate ya...
slowly drowning in sewage deep...
seeps in my mouth till i too sleep...
i'm dead here trapped inside...
forever...
open eyed...
i have died...
somehow alive...
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!!!!!!!!
i try to drown it all away...
DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEE!!!!!!!!!
a little more each day...

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well that one must've sucked...


Not in the slightest... Wow. I absolutely love that piece. The changing tempo beautifully moves the poem like a comtemplative drug filled swirl of words with it's initial fast build and slow coming down. You actually forced me to read faster and slower. I loved it! It reminds me of getting stoned when I was younger... sitting around with my friends and talking about sex, life, death, unfairness, philosophy, time (or lack of it)... the "astral" feeling of just floating around the room... the totally sane observations made while in that state (I think you know what I mean). What memories... :)

I've missed reading your work, Enki. :)
Someday he will be the death of me.

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everything i knew is gone...
everything i know is dead...
everything before is done...
the memories in my head...
it's frightening to think...
that they may all forget...
take the time to blink...
remember what she said...
deep breath now to calm yourself...
forever on your way...
deep inside you've always felt...
that you would not stay...
so enter the belly of the beast...
fly to another land...
always remember how it feels...
with your toes in alaskan sand...
love for this place shan't cease...
though wanderlust does burn...
the fish, the birds, and the beasts...
patiently await your return...
so run along now child of fate...
chosen by gods on high...
learn all the answers and sate...
you're unending question why...
and when you return if you find...
that all is not what it was...
then take my word it's a sign...
of what experience does...
grown up so fast..
you wanted it that way...
it never lasts...
any fucking way...
speed faster and faster...
unto your death...
the maniacal laughter...
your last breath...

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rave reviews i see... :unsure:

edit/
i want to thank everyone who takes the time to read and comment on my work...
particularly kryson and weeping angel...

Edited by Enki Anunaki, 19 January 2005 - 05:13 PM.


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Gah! I'd lost this thread! Sorry Enki!

Anyway, I love your poetry! Love how you can rhyme everything and it still makes sense. Update soon! :D

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one big sick cruel joke...
so damn funny i think i'll choke...
i spent so much time trying to die...
never even questioning why...
now that i want to live and go on...
the gods favor for me is gone...

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I think this last one is my #1 favourite from your collection, Enki. I can really relate that to a friend of mine.. =]

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thank you...more often than not the emotions represented in poetry seem to automatically relate themselves to familiar people or situations, or perhaps ourselves....

i've got some sappy love poetry i've been meaning to post but i'm reluctant... :ph34r:




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