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bleedinglife

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it doesnt have a title. . .

I want to scream
To runaway and hide
It's getting hard to breath
If I don't get out soon
I think I'm going to explode
I hate you
I always have
I always will
Your the Source of everyones problems
Your the reason people need help
Your the thing that swims inside us
You
Your the soft smooth shiny red liquid
That drips out of my vains
And slids smoothly down my wrist
And onto the floor
Your the pain that lingers inside
Fading away just a little bit
Then emerging back even more powerful then before
Your the reason for everything
Pain
Loss
Suffering
Your the reason my wrists are numb
Your the fog in front of my eyes
As I sit here
I wonder why me
You took everything
Now you take my life
With the last drop of blood
That will ever fall from my body again

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Death...

I liked it..You have a way with words and I hope you post more!

Peace

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Deep In the Shadows


Deep in the shadows
Where I hide my soul,
I Still feel the pain
Coming through an open
Hole.
As I look up at the sky,
I could feel it start to cry
On the ground as I lay
I here a dirge start to play
Above where I see a cloud
I have the erge to discourse out
Loud.
Now I want to go home.
There is no path to be shown.
Arduous it is to find a way out,
But still I have the erge to shout!
As I come upon a lake,
In the water I see a reflection of
My face.
Now I know
I must eradicate what
I feel for this place.
I had an assent with my soul to abstain
My feelings, I thought it
Would facilitate my mind to move forward.
Now I feel consolation in
This place.
As I fall in an ocean,
I have come to relinquish the fish.
Now I am on surface.
I am surrounded by creatures that
Seem to be from hell.
I could sense that they are all infidel.
It’s obscure to be in a
Place you do not know,
And to be surrounded by peculiar
Creatures, that seems to show.
I am appalled to see that
The creatures exodus,
As though timid by me.
As I run for my life,
I come across to see
A carcass of an animal,
With a bad stench indeed.

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As i sit
I hear the wispers
Taunting me
Slowly melting my sanity away
Mending it with haunting thoughts
Of the world as they see it
They tell me the same things
Like a record player stuck on repeat
Just once
It's what you want
It's what you need
Just take it
Do it once
Feel the metal
Slide across your skin
As smooth as ice
They will have succeded in their job soon
They will have welded my brain
Into their own little tourment playground

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Slowly
Slowly she opens the drawer
The dim light reflecting off
The shiny silver knives
She does not know what joy is
She has heard it
She has seen it
She has not felt it
She has felt pain
All her life
The only feeling she has ever known
It doesn't bother her
The red drips from her wrists
And falls quietly to the floor
The blood flows like a river
Her vision blurs
The knife falls from her hand
And clatters to the floor
She tumbles down to the ground
Into a pool of liquid red

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dark...in a way of slite empathy

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thanks, i think.

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When your a child
Wonderland is where you always wanted to be
Nothing makes sence
Everything is great
But now
Now it has changed
New creatures roam
No tea parties
No singing
Everything has been swallowed by the shadows
And this time
I cannot awake
I am trapped
Running
Hiding from the demonds
That haunt this once beautiful place
I wish i could change it
With a blink of an eye
Bring it back to what it once was
Alas, if i close my eyes
And loose the last faded image that i have left
This place
And I
Will be in the darkness forever

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I like this.

Edited by psi, 30 May 2004 - 07:54 AM.


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I like this.

Edited by psi, 30 May 2004 - 08:00 AM.


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i love it! the last three lines are a bit confusing, i don't really see how they tie in with the rest of the poem

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i dunno, i just use these poems to vent when im depressed.

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there still very beautiful

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hehe, that was a positive post

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thank you




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