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gothic_stallion

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HAVE YOU EVER??


Have you ever lived my life,
Spent a minute in my shoes??
If you haven't tell me why
You judge me as you do??

Have you ever woken up in the morning
And the hurting was so great
That you didn't want to get out of bed
and face a world of hate??

Have you ever seen your friend drive away,
Over come with tears
And you didn't know what you could do
To save her from her fears??

Have you ever thought about
Experimenting with crack
Thinking that it was the only thing
That could ever make you go back.

Have you ever lived my life
Spent a minute in my shoes??
If you haven't tell me why
You judge me as you do??

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Wow, that is very nice. Rhythmatic, intricate, well told, a good moral and point, a well conveyed message, you have talent in spades, keep up the good work.

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I like it. I'm sure alot of people can relate. Good work.

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thats really good. keep it up!

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I wish some people at my school would read that...and actually learn from it. Great job

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thanks glad youll like it....

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>> I've heard a poem simaller to that.. but you're's is mostly diffrent and really good its better than the first have you ever.. poem...
-AngelsFuck By Jack Off Jill-

I dreamed that I was you
I dreamed your ego died
Sad who loves you more than I do
I know you lied

I'll bask in your forever
Fucking waste of time
Angels fuck and devils screw

I wanted to heal me and then destroy the world
Piss in your heart and be that, and be that special girl.



user posted image Bounce Bounce Bounce.

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i have a copy of a similar poem, called have you ever, and its totally different, its about being pulled through life, like you have a leash attached to you that pulled you through, its pretty. kewl ill post it laterz, for people to read. :)

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ANOTHER STATISTIC

I don't wanna be another statistic
Some suicidal teen.
Who makes a choice to kill herself
When the world just seems too mean.
She can't go on with life
Or so to her it seems
Realityhas fallen short
And so have her many dreams.

Idon't wanna be another statistic
Some pregnant little girl,
Who met this great guy
And then gave sex a whirl.
She was only fifteen
But it felt so right.
She thought they'd be together
for more than just one night.

I don't wanna be another statistic
Some kid strung on crack.
Who started at a party
And now he can't turn back.
First cigarettes and alcohol
Now meth, crack and cocain.
He's been smoking it so long
that now he's gone insane.

I don't wanna be another statistic
Some girl left in the rain
Who was walking home from school
Then raped and left in pain.
She can't tell her parents
And it hurts to tell her friends.
She doesn't know what she'll do
To make this nightmare end.

Idon't wanna be another statistic
Some kid out of school
Who dropped out really early
And was acting like a fool.
He thought that it was boring.
He thought that it was dumb.
He doesn't have an education
And lives on the streets like a bum.

I don't wanna be another statistic
Some sterotypical teen.
I'm gonna make a difference
I'll finish with my dream
I won't end up pregnant
On drugs or even dead.
I won't drop out of school
Because I'll use my head.

Idon't wanna be another statistic
To fit into some mold
Of what society thinks of kids today
Because its getting kinda old.
Not all of us are bad
In fact most of us are good.
When will the world see us
and give us credit like it should?

Edited by gothic_stallion, 24 June 2004 - 11:36 PM.


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nice poem, though i tend to embody the opposite...

i do want to be another statistic...a braindead self destructive teen...and after your society drives me psychotic...i'll hear every one of you scream... :lol:

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very beautiful..i feel that way every day...my name is painful_tears because im always crying..i weep because im judged and i weep for those just like me cant wait to read more

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lol...........thanks

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glad u can relate

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amazing poem

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OMG!! I can really really relate to that. You should be a poetry writer. Its really good!!!!




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