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-= Kutulu 1 =-

Blackened mace of tempered steel
Stormy weather icy feel
Darkest blue night sky glistens
Thunder cracks as lightning listens
Tethered god of bounded glory
In the depths he sleeps to tell his story
Brother of sword and single eye
Hang illuminate in clouded sky
Blackest water from purest rain
Death he lives has come again
Battle rages his fury deepens
Ever growing mountain steepens
The bear hangs low, eye shines through
The dead god sounds his call for you.

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Holy War
Forgiveness plumes from the sacrificial bonfire's pyre
The smoke columns rise, spread, and fall back to the earthen gods
We have created this war and now we must destroy
We have done the unthinkable because we can think
We have started the end of days

Prayers and supplication are all that remain tonight
For all of our enemies have been slain in the name of the gods
We have created what we have now become
We have done what we have said would never happen
We have entered into where there is no escape

Within the sacred text our course has been written
And now the prophecies must become our manifest
We have created a false god within holy pages
We have done what should have never been thought
We have penned our own destruction

Rape me (5-30-05)
Murder now, the one before
Beat me down upon the floor
Treat me like the trash I am
Rape me and begin again

Murder now, the one that's next
Curse me down and place a hex
Rule me like the prince you are
Take my life and see how far

Murder now, it's all been lost
Show me what's your hidden cost
Loathe me like all that's hated
Drug me now so I'm sedated

Murder now, the trap's been set
Gag me don't hear me fret
Cut me so my flesh can cry
Watch me as the blood does dry

Murder now, the reaper's fate
Tell me how your thirst is sate
Kill me I don't give a damn
Fuck me like the fool I am

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This hole I dig...
Digging deeper into the yard, into my soul
I pass the soil and clay for what awaits
Solid as stone and cold to the bone
Selfless and destructive the blisters boil
Yet deeper I delve into personal hell
Nothing passes save for meandering clouds
But they have nothing to do with this

The heartless surrender of hopes I dream
As the hole widens and lessens the fear
Deeper I climb into the new nothingness
Higher I fall into that which was before
Now there is something new, I can see it
Upon the horizon there, within myself
Only this time though a blinded notion

What lies under the soil - secrets, knowing?
The piles that surround placed there by wisdom
Yet the hole expands and the earth remains
Is this what I was expecting to find
Or is this something that will bewilder
With pick and shovel I'll continue this
Through this dream I will carry on

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Nice poetry. Very well written.

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Butterfly kisses (07-17-2005)
Flitter and flutter to flowers in flight
Fly all the day and sleep through the night
Pitter and patter with wings all a-buzz
Drinking the nectar and pollen like fuzz


Now butterfly, butterfly where do you be?
Fly through my yard, land upon me!
And butterfly, butterfly where did you go?
Blow me a kiss so others will know!


Licking and laughing from fermented fruit
Now fly up in circles now ain't that a beaut
Singing and swaying from blooms in the breeze
From garden to weed and wherever you please


But butterfly,butterfly where are you now?
Come back for more it don't matter how!
And butterfly, butterfly prettiest sight
Gimme your kisses, yeah that's right!

Read it again and see the pictures
http://www.livejournal.com/users/qryztufre/9531.html

Or just see the pictures! (note: contains other bugs)
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I think that's a very prety poem. Good job.

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My Morris Dance
Dancing on the edge of sunshine
Below the darkest depths line
Looking up I see the heavens glisten
Under me the dead and fallen listen
Tapping out my life story in Morse
As I smile as if no remorse

*tap* *tap* *tap*
*scrape* *scrape* *scrape*
*tap* *tap* *tap*

Faking happiness is a hardy chore
Faking bliss as if always wanting more
A kiss to the crowd as they applaud
If only they knew I'm such a fraud
Can they hear the words of the beat?
This story I tell with my feet

*tap* *tap* *tap*
*scrape* *scrape* *scrape*
*tap* *tap* *tap*
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Dancing on the edge of desire
Fearing to touch even my life's fire
Looking up I see the choirs sing
While below grins the demon king
So this jig I'll dance some more
This exhaustion has come before

*tap* *tap* *tap*
*scrape* *scrape* *scrape*
*tap* *tap* *tap*

Feigning life to escape my death
But now as I run outta breath
I'll continue this dance the beat's still strong
No one around knows what's wrong
So the morse dance I'll do
And this dance I do for you

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Now I am here, my face against the wall
Bloodied, afraid, and I don't understand
I do what you ask, but you're asking is silent
You want things I can not give to you
But I'll try if you speak your mind

Look at me here, punished, afraid
My mind is open, my mind is empty
I listen for you to hear your orders
Fill my mind with your hate and desire
I will give to you everything that's asked
But you must speak your mind

See me here, I want to please you
Even though I am too afraid to move
I will crawl out from under this rock
Should you need anything from me
Yet punished I am for not listening
But I heard you and did as you said

I'll hold my ear to the wall waiting for you
To hear your call so that I may beckon
I need you to hear me too sometimes
And even if you wont I still love you
I will do everything I can to make you happy
But you must tell what those things are

I think you forget to speak sometimes
Sometimes I think you just thought you said it
I have been listening, waiting on your whim
I am sorry, even though I never heard your call
So I am beaten for this disobedience
But I followed your every whim

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Full Circle
I am above this, looking down on what happens
It's not fun here you're so bestial
You know this hurts me (it hurts you too)
I'm not breathing wishing I wasn't alive
Can you hear my cries ~ silence otherwise
You have me bound with rope and secrecy
I've got my head down from fear and pain
And all my thoughts are hope'n

As above as below you say
What comes 'round
As below ~ but I'm innocent


I fear you father as pain replaces love
I only wanted sleep sweet dream release
None of this I'll find tonight ~ never
Paternal lines crossed and sever
Any hope of luck lost in lust disgust
Still I remain your faithful boy
No toys relieve the memories crystallized
This is now love/hate both victimized

As above so below you say
What comes 'round
As below ~ in my innocence

You say this circle is drawn complete
But I am in the line now ~ incomplete
This cycle rushes forward one more mind
Soon to be another body one more time
Soon one more savior with another toy
This boy has now become a man to ponder
Can the rounds be severed stopping here?
But in this end infinity cycles fear

As above so below you say
What comes 'round
As below ~ seeking innocence

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Sonnet for Somebody else's Wife (Oct. 09, 05)
There is pleasure in pain of this I'm sure
But don't harm the lovers in their embrace
In all things of beauty something impure
But don't spread lies of a quarreled disgrace

Sometimes our secrets are there for reasons
Between two people that long to be one
The hidden truths often buried for seasons
So don't spread rumors to ruin their fun

They laugh and love as the day it began
The heart it warms at this prettiest sight
Gorgeous like flowers entwining again
Something is ugly in this perfect sight

Oblivious ones not marital bliss
Obviously in true love as they kiss

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A sonnet for abuse (Oct. 10, 05)
Like a Cool cat grace and complacency
There is truth in the vilest of lies
Like the breeze blowing upon nap and knee
There is love in the most painful of cries

Beat me but love me touch me so sweetly
I know there is love hidden in abuse
Dearest Caress of callused hands hurt me
Now use this broken body to amuse

Like the setting sun so sweet and serene
There has to be love within you someplace
Fade like thoughts that evanesce from a dream
And when you draw back your fist kiss my face

Someday I will be letting you go free
This'll be the same day you're killing me

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A day of writing...
My World II
Maybe the world is flat
Would it matter?
It matters not to me.
Why should it?
If I walk, I walk the straight line
I know, it's done all the time
What of you, is your world round?
And no, I'm not clowning around
Sit and dwell
Does it matter to you?
Should it matter?
Maybe your world is flat

I know your looking (today)
I know you are there
Sitting in your chair
Reading these words I wrote
Tear in eye?
Knot in throat?
Laughter and mirth,
For what it's worth
Was there a spark of thought?
Did you feel the emotions wrought?
Or did you pass it all by
Never batting an eye
With never a care
Of all this I've been bound to share
Tell me your thoughts,
What it is your thinking
Could you feel me flying?
Can you see me sinking?


Fluffy Bunny Slippers
My mind is filled with hate
Hate you can not sedate
A mind confused and oft abused
You still want these shoes?

My mind is bent and twisted
My life has been black listed
And still you want to relate
Can you handle the hate?

This life is rife with horror
I am an atrocity adorer
Are these shoes what you need?
They could make you bleed

It's a kill or be killed world
And I've given killing a whorl
I'll do it again and smile
but would you walk that mile...


I AM
Of all that was spoken
Of all that was said
I AM
Of all those who've listened
Of all those who understand
I AM
Of all that is forgiven
Of all that is Sacred
I AM
Of all that has been lost
Of all that has been found
I AM
Of all the mistakes
And all of the mistaken
I AM

Without you I'm Nothing
(written for Cyndi)
You are perfection of light
The shining in the bleakest night
Nothing reflects quite so bright
Can I be your shining knight?

You are a most wondrous sight
You lighten the deepest plight
You make all the wrongs seem right
Can I be your shining knight?

You take me to the highest height
With your heart so perfect white
I no longer have the will to fight
Can I be your shining Knight?

You're perfection without blight
My love for you it is not slight
So Together, maybe we might
Can I be your shining Knight?

For you these words I write
And if you feel these words are trite
Then at your funeral's Rite
Can I be your shining Knight?

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Another day of writing...

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I am the voice of the Goddess
Her words are spoken through me
I am an adept and novice
I am who she wants me to be
Can you feel her light shine
Do you understand her subtle way
Can you see that she is mine
Can you hear these words I say?

I am the heart of the Goddess
Her ways are taught through me
I am an adept and novice
I am here to make you see




Do you remember?

IA IA ZI DINGER KANPA!
Do you remember them all?
The ones before the fall
The ones that heard the call
The ones that came and died
The ones that you despised
The ones that cheated lied

I beg of you to listen
I long for your recall
I have never asked before
But now I ask your all


IA IA ZI DINGER KANPA!
Do you remember them all?
Those you've failed to thrall
Those who've dropped the ball
Can you hear the lonely cries
While you linger another dies
It is you I now despise

I beg of you to hear me
I long for you to listen
I have never asked of thee
But now you have to listen


IA IA ZI DINGER KANPA!
Do you remember them all?
Your children big and small
Your creations about to fall
I know it was not just a lie
Your promise that we wouldn't die
So please hear the children cry
IA IA ZI DINGER KANPA!

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To all the beautiful people!

The Kidney Thieves have a song which I happen to find as one of the saddest songs I've ever heard. I understand who pretty is, I've tried to date her in the past. I've also been her at one time or another so I certainly can feel the pain thats spoken within the song's lyrics.

Pretty ~ Kidney Thieves
I'm sure that most of you can also relate to being "Pretty"
I'm pretty, what do I deserve
I feel pretty, until I walk out the door
I wonder when pretty's gonna bleed
My monster has all the time he needs

So I came home to feel ugly again
Feels better alone, pretty ugly again
If you come back around I may not let you in
Cause I don't understand what this pretty is.

You're so pretty, could I get the nerve
You said, "I love you, pretty"
What do I deserve
I wonder if pretty's gonna waste
My monster has all the time in the day

So I came home to feel ugly again
Feels better alone, pretty ugly again
If you come back around I may not let you in
Cause I don't understand what this pretty is.

I wonder what pretty has to say I want to feel pretty every day
I wonder what it's like to be pretty.


I'm not a monster
Hey Pretty, please answer the phone
For far too long you've been alone
Go out with me dinner and then movie
When we're in line stand next to me, pretty

Hey Pretty, please answer your door
Stop dragging pretty feet upon the floor
Go out with me for a walk in the park
When we're hand in hand can you feel the spark?

Hey Pretty please tell me your thought
And Stop thinking all of this is for naught
Go out with me happily by my side
Maybe for a magical carriage ride

Hey Pretty please, don't go home to wallow
And I know this may be hard to swallow
But to me you are truly Pretty, please
I beg of you trust, upon bended knee

Hey Pretty, please try hard to understand
I'm not your monster but I am a man
So pretty please let me show this to you
The feelings I feel are honestly true


It's far to often that a beautiful person is made to feel substandard and it breaks my heart. It does not matter as to what the shape or size of a person is so long as they are beautiful on the inside - and it's far too often that even the people that are beautiful on the outside are beaten down mentally enough so that they feel like they are monsters themselves.

And it is to these beautiful people (all of them) that this "reply" is dedicated.

And chances are - this is dedicated to YOU!

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Love is Gray
Aged to perfection my loving dear
I cherish the times when you are near
Nothing the matter and nothing to harm
I hold you again within my loving arm
I'll stay with you till we're both old and gray
I'll stay with you till our own dying day

You're only as old as you feel inside
So don't cover up there is nothing to hide
Nothing the matter, and nothing is wrong
So long as we carry on our love song
I'll stay with you so our inner children can play
I'll stay with you till our own dying day

So when you look in that mirror what do you see
Is she old and decrepit or a child in glee?
Nothing the matter and nothing to lose
The answer is clear and it's yours to choose
I'll stay with you and "I vute you" I'll say
I'll stay with you till our own dying day
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Little Miss Pageantry
Dancing debutante do that dirty dirge
Though the marrow will be filled with sorrow
Resist the temptation control the urge
Steal the next moment or beg or borrow

The pageants won and pretty ribbon placed
Wear your regal smile all the while
New exploits to find to have you disgraced
So strut to the new rhythm and smile

Dancing spring daisy sing your song for me
Leave your woes at the door and fake it
I'll take you to the heights you want to be
You will be a big star if you can take it

But you can not be you ever again
So tell me now before we must begin

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Daddy's little Girl
Oh dearest Daddy on your golden chair
I see you staring stripping off my clothes
Please allow me just one more gasp of air
I hate your from my head down to my toes

Dearest Daddy another beer for you
I don't know what I did or what I said
I'll keep my eyes closed until you are through
And until then I will wish I were dead

Oh Dearest Daddy why are you so mean?
You treat me like a rag doll so surreal
I'm not a toy but your beautiful queen
Some day I hope you know just how I feel

I'm daddy's girl, but not the way you'd think
And if I had my way - into the abyss I'd sink

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In a moment of Silence
The laugh riots got a bit out of control
Now there's tears in the eyes of the proud and strong
The Thought Police will need to work overtime
To correct this appalling instance of free thought.

How dare they say something funny in at this time!
Can't they see that the mood is dour and dire?
Don't they know any better then to make a quick jibe?
There are better things for the mind then humor

Laughter is deafening as it breaks silence
Spilling over from a select few to the many
Don't they know it's better to bottle that emotion?
Do they think they can be respected, smirking?

Their incites of insight are wetting our feet
In a time when our morals should be high and dry
So sop it up because the cup has overflowed
And here I am without humor or a towel

Save The Last Dance
You're dancing on the edge of dis-ease
So save that last dance for me, please
Tapping toes to rhythmic irrelevance
Looking forward to that final prance

The beats belittle our perfect mind
A harmony of no other kind
And this melody of melancholy
Will bring you closer and closer to me

So dance on within the confining notes
Where no one cares for the words from our throats
And sing that song no one wants to hear
Just don't forget that last dance, my dear


It's a bit late now, but one I wrote fer Valentines day ;)
Stalker
This is a love poem
I wrote it for you
To profess my desire
So you'll know it is true
And when you read it
Read it with care
Because when I wrote it
I knew you were there
I'll do what I can
To have you with me
For I am your man
And this you will see
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I'll do what it takes
To make you be mine
So move passed those fakes
And open your mind
When push comes to shove
I'll get out of this gutter
With the strength of love
My mind is a flutter
So I'll give you my heart
And I'll give you his too
Then maybe you'll start
To see I love you

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Cynthia's Storm
The coming storm as seen through the window
The pittering of rain pattering upon the sill
A flash sets me aright within my chair
And the crack of thunder breaks the calm
A sudden gust of wind seemingly rocks the home
My own safety in apparent and sudden jeopardy
Yet within my mind only thoughts of you

Another calm as seen upon the evening news
The radar shows the prettiest green skies above
But the yellow follows and then the red
A thunderous sound breaks me from the forecast
And again through the window my gaze rests
The swaying trees barely visible through the rains
Yet within my mind only thoughts of you

The breeze without gusts in a gail force
And the rains now rush in a bitter torrent
Though are soon replaced by icy spheres
The crashing hail beats upon the roof deafening
Flash, boom, flash boom plays the celestial band
The heart of the storm must be overhead now
Yet within my mind only thoughts of you

It's passing now, though still in full fury
The lights flicker on and off then extinguish
Alone now surrounded by both noise and silence
Alone within darkness and its interrupting flashes
I know the storms will soon pass over this place
Leaving me alone awaiting your return
Yet within my mind only thoughts of you




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