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Cyrus

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    Green Eggs And Ham

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I walk through a forest of dead oak trees. My mind thinks of you. The things that you made me do in life. The way you made me act when young. I walk furthur till I reach a pond. The scum is growing strong around it. It reminds me of me. I may be the bottom of the barrel, but I am still here. I am still strong. What you did, what we did...what happened, was not my fault. You did not see it coming. Large lights, screaming, tearing, pulsing, brightness, darkness. I screamed your name...then went black. I came too...I saw your face. Pale...red spotted...missing...yet, with a smile. Is that it? To be Happy? Is that what you wanted of me? So many questions left. You were the only one understanding, careing, wanting...needing. You are gone now, and I remember your torn face...with peace and a smile. I wait for our paths to cross again in another life, as they have crossed in everylifetime beforehand. I will see you again...and when that day comes...I shall cry tears of blood.



(i know my poems are strange...a little different from what i hear of other poeple. Most of the time I like to ramble and call it poerty...just tell me what you guys think of this and I might post some more of my stuff, if I don't get too many bad reviews.)
THE ENRAGED MONKEY!!!

GUNS DON'T KILL PEOPLE, PEOPLE KILL PEOPLE AND MONKEYS DO TOO (if they've got a gun)

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Mercy

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Wow..I like it.
I think it's awesome that you write differently.
Some of the greatest works of art, have been just mad ramblings..

So Kudo's to you, and please write more..I can't wait to see what else you've got in store..

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blackbambi

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You're an awsome writer, i really hope you put more of you poems up

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shdwprncss

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I concur... well done!

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Tormented-Silence

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I to Agree with blackbambi

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MoonlightChaser

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I like it so keep writing, I don't see a single bad review!




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