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writing a book, need some input
Posted 26 February 2010 - 10:48 AM
The planet is fine, the people are fucked.
dip me in chocolate and throw me to the lesbians.
I see eyes in the darkness of my mind.....
The voices in my head dont like me......they dont like me at all.....
RETARDED HOMOSEXUALL MOUNTAIN GNOMES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Darkness can be your best friend, and it can be your mortal enemy....
things that you can hid in it are monumental. when you wish, the
dark will become your best friend.....it can hid anything....everything
and almost everything anyone wishes to hide.....the darkness is upon
us...we just need to wake up, and realize that a new age is coming.
when the first person wakes up, it will be a shock...then that person
will realize that the nightmare that he has been living in has been a
dream. a dream that will not end, until he accepts the fact that the
world has been left in darkness. the person will then realize that
the darkness is not an enemy, it is a friend....it can be more distant
than a love that is carried on, 30000 miles between two....or, it can
be more intimate than the best lover....when the darkness comes.....
you be ready?
Posted 28 February 2010 - 01:33 PM
adult comedy, i would appreciate your input, thanks
Well sadly I'd need a little bit more input to base a vote on than the genre / title alone. (Based on title I might pick it up and read the back)
In screenwriting we do what's called a logline. I'm not sure in novel writting what it would be called.
A logine is about three sentences that tell what the story is about.
"When an under-appreciated boy is accidentally left behind by his family when they leave for a European vacation, he must learn how to take care of himself and be the man of the house, only to discover that his house has been targeted by bumbling burglars whom he thwarts several times before realizing that they know that he is alone and that they are coming back, so he must now single-handedly defend the house."
That would be a logline for "Home Alone".
So can you share a little bit of what the story is about?
Sometimes it's in the darkness that we truly learn to see.
I'm Dexter in training - so watch it! Imma watchin' you!
"You have enemies? Good. That means you've stood up for something, sometime in your life." - Winston Churchill
Posted 10 May 2010 - 02:35 AM
I see what you did there.
A fractured mind is a beautiful thing.
The internet is for...
"If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different, I'd rather be completely fucking mental!"
We're all born the same way: wet, cold, and screaming; life is just as messy as death.
We all eat, drink, piss, shit, fuck, and die. Someone mind tellin' me the punch line?
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