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Tonight is your night


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CarelessEmpathy

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Well let me first say that this is the first time i've ever put anything i've written out for people to read. I know comments, both positive and negative are coming i'm sure of that and that's cool.

The inspiration behind this piece is simple. It's something i told a girl that i knew that's in a wheel chair after a date i went on with her.


Tonight is your night
Pretend as you might that this harsh world fades away
You and i are the only ones here, an empty world
We're all alone and Tonight is your night.

Let's not be depressed
Stand for the first time
Let me see that dress
Show it off to everyone
We're the only ones here
But that's all that matters
Tonight is your night.

Have fun, Let's dance
Let me spin you around
It's not late, this never has to end
You may not know it
but i see you this way everyday
Your perfect in my eyes.


CarelessEmpathy
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There's always a choice...Straightjacket or Suicide.

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blackbambi

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That is a really sweet poem and i hope you'll put more up

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I'm not all that great with expressing what i feel into words. I appreciate your kindness, thanks.
~Shaun~
There's always a choice...Straightjacket or Suicide.

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Sweet and soft
I like it.

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