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HER PRAYER
Deep goes the tear,
Down her sad face
Followed by another
with little or no space

scared and alone
with only one thought
to see the other side
without feelings she fought

No one would understand,
the choices she makes
Yet it would release her
from all her mistakes

As the days go by,
she feels more pressure
With feelings so heavy
its unbearable to measure

And to ignore
her best friends plee
of the promise
she has made to he

Everyday she will pray,
to the man in white,
to take her soul,
from all their sight.

written in 2000 ©


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My Mind

Sitting, watching, nothing
thinking, staring hard
Lost in a sea of darkness,
scared to end it alone

Waiting, listening, Stupid
knowing, seeing, feeling sad
Bleeding, screaming loudly
Pressure of life Heavy, Mad!

Words to express, my torn
thoughts of lost, tucked away.
Frightened, scared alone
A light? Tini, Where?

Sounds loud, bursting
Concentrating, stories
thoughs spinning, spinning
Stop and Fall, "my mind"

written on this day
7-2-01 ©


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No More Pain

Most times I hate
Sometimes I cry
fearing the light
hiding in shadows
Pain felt beneath
cryin hard tears
angry lost control
Drinkin, sad songs
Holding the blade
feeling the steal
body heat rising
overwhelming me
Cut out my pain
watch if flow away
look and cry for it
Fleeing from it
Instant calm
my body tingles
a natural high
No more pain

Written on this day
11/30/02 8:30am ©


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beautiful

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Thanks

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I like the first one "HER PRAYER" the best. Such a powerfdul opening, hooks the reader right away. The whole of the poem is powerful and it contains some nice allusions.

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You write powerful poems, I like My mind the best.

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Devastation

quickly racing, my heart
panic melting nerves
eyes showing off lies

Body languages odd
Lights and sounds scream
pressures winding up

Murderous thoughts inside
scaring me deep within
slowly measuring pain

Sky's glowing radiant,
Crashing down, inevitable
Chest compacting tight

Life dead within, dead
Mourn for us, mourn
Shadows within, ice

Devastation

Written 12-22-03
BY me

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See, its interesting because almost everyone writes about death and diseet, yet here I read your and the bad things that you write about are good in a sense, and even in this you seem to be hiding something that you didn't write. I like them, keep it up.

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thank you, thank you.
I don't want to die, but when something sucky happens, those type of feeling amerge, and then my pen takes over.

Glad you like them.

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All my poems

Best just to give yall a full look at them all. Reminder, they are all copy written.




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