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Beauty
Lovely darkness that caresses my soul,
Lovely moon that shines in the night,
Sweet stars that adorn the dark sky,
Lovely soul that steals my heart,
Lovely pain that makes my heart ache,
watch, listen, breath and be one with the night
hunt, feed and bleed under the stars,
kill , love and hate ,
take, give and die,
love me, hate me ,take me ..make me,
feel me, touch me, caress me,
make love to me now,
under the star
because i can only be loved in the
darkness of the night.
Leticia Gallardo
Copyright ©2003 Leticia Gallardo


(Can you feel me)
I whisper in the night..
"I love you.."
hoping you can hear me,I think of you
hoping you are thinking of me too,
I want you,I need you,
keep my secret :
I'll always need you, I love you,
for ever and always,
I love you. Can you feel me?
Can you hear me? I'm always there,
where ever you are,
I can feel you and
sometimes I can almost see you,
I keep inside all that can't be said,
oh, you are so amazing,ahh sweet surrender,my love,
my friend,I love you!
you are everything I need.
I wish I could kiss you
but i'm not there,
it hurts, I wish..I wish i could have
just one,..one minute,
one kiss,
one look into your eyes,
you ask me if Ilove you??!! I adore you,
you are my life,
my madness, my world,
you own my heart.
Close your eyes my love
and just feel me caressing your soul,
feel me, feel my heart,
can't you feel me wanting you so bad?
I love you!..so much
I would die for just one night.
I love you, I want you, my lover,my friend,
my happiness, hear me cry for you
when the nights are cold
and i need your love,close your eyes
smile, be happy,kiss me,
I love you with all my heart,
need me feel me,
i'll always stay by your side,
let me love you,
let me be all that you need,
let me drawn inside you eyes,
let me melt within your heart,
dont ever forget that I'll always
love you, with all my heart.
Leticia Gallardo
Copyright ©2003 Leticia Gallardo


Untitled
My heart stoped beating,
tears rolled down my face,
it was horrible like a nightmare.

My eyes blinded by tears
my lips trembling in fear
my mind troubled by doubts
my heart beating too slow.

The darkness brought me joy
brought light into my world
the light too dark to be seen
but always searching for me.

Now that its shine it's gone
I hide away from the world
My eyes blinded by tears
my lips trembling in fear.
Leticia Gallardo
Copyright ©2003 Leticia Gallardo



?
Could it be real? This love I feel?
Could it be real that is so pure?
Inside i feel so warm and happy
Could it be real that i'm in love?
(My heart beats faster, and I lose
control!)
Could it be real that that i'm in love?
Could it be real this passion i feel?
Could it be real that i can fear?
Could it be real that i am alive?
Could it be real that i am loved?
Leticia Gallardo
Copyright ©2003 Leticia Gallardo



Desire I
Deep within my heart
i feel is pure i know
is right but still,
i need you my love,
my heart is yours
my body too i need you,
my lover.
I need your hands to hold
me close to your heart.
Close your eyes and whisper
my name and say that you love
me, feel me my hand on yours,
my lips gently kissing yours.
See me in the darkest of
the nights, reflected on
the moon, feel my touch
when the cold win blows against
your skin, see me on the fire
of our desire let it be the
light that guides you always back to me.
You have become part of my
own heart, let our hearts join forever,
give in to my touch,
let my words seduce you, let
me set your passion free.
Let me feel your
hands caress
my naked body when you hold me
in your strong arms,
i want you, your lips, i want
your skin to melt with my touch
i want to feel you deep inside me
setting me free making me feel.
My lips tremble for your kiss,
my body needs you so i can feel,
i truly do needlove you,
i hope you can hear me calling your name tonight.
I listen to your breath and my soul
meets yours and I feel you so close
to me, I feel your love,your passion, so
deep in me my spirit loves you more
and more everytime i think of you,
I hear you say "I love you" in my mind
and I just love the sound of your
voice I love everything about you.
I just love you.
Leticia Gallardo
Copyright ©2003 Leticia Gallardo

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Good?????
In the Shadows of a death and decay that I dewell in untell the day that I cen kill every one left a live.

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Untitled
My heart stoped beating,
tears rolled down my face,
it was horrible like a nightmare.

My eyes blinded by tears
my lips trembling in fear
my mind troubled by doubts
my heart beating too slow.

The darkness brought me joy
brought light into my world
the light too dark to be seen
but always searching for me.

Now that its shine it's gone
I hide away from the world
My eyes blinded by tears
my lips trembling in fear.
Leticia Gallardo
Copyright ©2003 Leticia Gallardo


I really liked the Untitled one

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Thanks.. Tormented.

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That was lovely, I read them all and I was thinking, you must really have love or have loved someone deep, and by the response you gave Tormented, I couldn't see you truly writing those from your surface, those seem to have come from a deeper place.

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Thank you, MoonLightChaser and you are right about me loving someone deeply :) Thank you...

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09/05/2003
"Suicide"
I am so lonely, alone, no one is here with me,
it hurts very bad, it hurts all the time
and the pain has been with me for a while.
I think i'm dying inside,
I'm so alone, I wish I could be happy.
I have always been my own best friend,
no one likes the way I am among my kind
and the rest of the world.
I dwell upon my shattered dreams
I cry for that which can never be,
I lay here alone, so alone that tears are welcomed
by my eyes.
I know I am crazy, I have driven myself through
this alley of frozen guilt to the jungles of sweet madness
what started out as a thought
has become an obsession with death and pain.
I'm so cold, I can't feel anything but pain,
my loneliness so dark is a rainbow in the night sky.
The stars smile at me behind the sheer green color
of my bloodshot eyes.. no more tears left..
blood driping to the carpet.. death lurking inside me
a soft gasp, a moan of pain.. the scarlet essence
of my life drifting off into space..eyes glaced..
thud..thud..thud my heart beats
..thud......thud..... I'm dead.

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[ To my Love, I adore you D. ]
"What we are"
I miss you.
I miss the way you see right through me
With those gentle eyes,
I miss the sound of your voice,
The whispers in the night.
I miss holding you,
I miss you.
I miss your spirit, your heart,
I wish I had a spell that allowed
Me to have you right here, right now.
Long years I have waited for you,
Now I feel my hope dissapearing,
I feel I'll never drown in your beautiful blue eyes,
I long to kiss your lips, to see you here,
You are the most wonderful posion of love,
My treasure hidden in the most secret passages
Of my haunted heart, my one true love, my owner.
Yet I'm alone, in a deserted island in the middle of an
Ocean of hate and secret desires
To give myself to you completely and get lost in the storm.
I love you,
Me, a lonely soul, a particle of dust in the air,
And You, the ray of light that makes me visible to the naked eye.
Me that which quietly awaits the end, You the roaring thunder in the tempest.
You beautiful angel with kind eyes, ilusion of love deep in my mind,
Father of my passion keeper of my fire bearer of my lust.
I a child without your Love.

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"REalitY ChecK" 11:36pm 01/03/2004
I need Love, I need to learn of my reality,
that you are not here to lick and taste my tears.
Tears of longing, cold fire of my soul that tattoos
my innocence upon my freckled cheeks
and washes away the sins engraved upon me
by desire, despire and the hunger for you my Lover.
Artificial heart that pumps liquid pain through my veins
of tabacco ash and organs of coffee grains.
Feed me with you love and the forbidden love of you and I,
screams of lust stain the walls of this shrine to you my God,
full with human flesh and human faults, you have shaped me,
the girl inside the red curls, hiding behind the haunted flowers
that never sprung to life and remained soft dead buttons
of tender green, among the death of winter the frailty of my skin,
pale shelter of my sins, the incredible sadness, the thousand tears,
the tumultous river of Life with its many rocks and shallow ponds
before the last painful breath of the mighty waterfall.
With love i have found an enormous treasure: meaning, purpose
mingled with hate and suicidal disposition of a human life.
A fragile figurine, its fire extinguished, the smoke drifts away and as the snow flakes fall upon this desert of doubts and once infernal flame has weakened now.
The kiss of a father forgotten, buried within the light of years past: the family, the present frozen in space and Time.

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09/05/2003
"Suicide"
I am so lonely, alone, no one is here with me,
it hurts very bad, it hurts all the time
and the pain has been with me for a while.
I think i'm dying inside,
I'm so alone, I wish I could be happy.
I have always been my own best friend,
no one likes the way I am among my kind
and the rest of the world.
I dwell upon my shattered dreams
I cry for that which can never be,
I lay here alone, so alone that tears are welcomed
by my eyes.
I know I am crazy, I have driven myself through
this alley of frozen guilt to the jungles of sweet madness
what started out as a thought
has become an obsession with death and pain.
I'm so cold, I can't feel anything but pain,
my loneliness so dark is a rainbow in the night sky.
The stars smile at me behind the sheer green color
of my bloodshot eyes.. no more tears left..
blood driping to the carpet.. death lurking inside me
a soft gasp, a moan of pain.. the scarlet essence
of my life drifting off into space..eyes glaced..
thud..thud..thud my heart beats
..thud......thud..... I'm dead.

I also find this one really lovely

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Thank you ever so much darling.... they come from my heart...

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beautiful poems, i agree with moonlight chaser... those poems came from somewhere deep




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