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bitterillusions

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Here we find me,
Pulling a poem across my skin:

I look over my arm.
My Violin.
A silver razor,
My golden bow.
Each note redder than the last.

Soon a pool;
A scarlet symphony of pain
Pulls down my broken body.

The harder I play
The better the pain
Expanding my emptiness.

Such a sweet song
My hurt sings.

I?ve left myself
Consume the pain
Delusions of blood or
Notes of the symphony its
All the same.

Down I set the glissing bow
And stare into the broken strings,
Which once were whole

Here I lay in a trepid pool
Of dieing notes
Staring into the Spoils
Of my bitter
Symphony

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She sleeps in yellow to night.
Is yellow hope or despaired?

The night, canters by leaving
Ebony were once blue
Empty the sky.

The grass Is dieing-
Or only now coming alive?
Once pricelessly emerald, the
Ground now, is colicky and yellow-

She sleeps in yellow tonight.

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I really liked that one.

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wow that was awesome... i loved how you made the playing of the song and the bleeding come together. beautiful work

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lovely imagery.. i love your poems

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I've already told you what I think of your writing style :wub:

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:D Ahh thanks guys




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